daily haiku #5 : daybreak

[As promised, second haiku. Yes, yes, I know, dawn and daybreak aren’t very different from each other, but daybreak sounded more pretentious and dramatic, so I’m going with that. Also, as far as I know, not all haikus (is that the plural?) have to have 17 syllables; they can be shorter, right?]

daybreak

molten fingers
dissolve misty-eyed stars
in Neptune’s cradle.

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